Friday, February 4, 2011

Poem: Love to see you there....

Love to see you there....
When i am down with sad feelings.

Love to see you there....
When i am all alone.

Love to see you there....
When i go through hard times.

Love to see you there....
When everything seems tumbling down to pieces.

Love to see you there....
When you are there on my side...
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4 comments:

  1. Oushee OusephFebruary 7, 2011 at 2:16 AM

    Good start Clayton :)
    But it gives a sense on incompleteness :I
    May be you can wind it up a little :)
    Otherwise its a Fab start :D

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  2. Bijin JoseFebruary 7, 2011 at 10:20 AM

    Kickstart indeed, Clay2...i liked the 'hope in despair' feel...good start...:)

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  3. ClaytonFebruary 7, 2011 at 10:22 AM

    Thanks Bijin and Oushee for your comment :)

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  4. jesuszjessicaFebruary 8, 2011 at 7:31 AM

    Love d lines....extend a bit more in itt ;)

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